Grieving
Your life ended early, before it's startAnd saying goodbye rips out my heartSaying farewell means losing some loveBut saying goodbye isn't saying enoughYet, saying farewell is saying too muchSaying...
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A very heartfelt and sad farewell/goodbye to a friend RIP. Beautifully writ dear Bonnie. Leslie{Mr}. AKA Screaming Eagle. Aspiringpoets site.HitAngels site.
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Such a beautiful write, Bonnie....very touching!I also loved the way you went back and forth between the words goodbye and farewell in every line...and the conclusion at the very last line where those...
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Very sad piece, well written.ChrisHitangel's poetry forum My PostPoems Portfolio
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Very sad, Bonnie, and the alternating pattern promoted a spiral effect that plunged the reader into dispair. Well written piece.Love,A
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Very sad and touching piece Bonnie, its stunning. With your beautiful words you painted a fitting and lovely goodbye and farewell. Thank you for sharing it. ~Jules~
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